Well the only problem with your diagram is the man with ball cannot run with it yet. In Marathon Veer, the Read back is lined up to the weak side (most of time) as a WB. The man under takes snap and as Read back comes between the Pitch man (guy who took snap) and center and gets ball (this is quick, quick, almost like he takes snap, wink) Now this Read back can run, throw, go get popcorn, whatever. The tailback dives (on straight option) off the outside of guard and meshes with Read back who reads the defense. The man under or Pitch man has pivoted and come out to same side wide and now is the pitch man that the Read back has the option to give it, keep it, and or pitch it to pitch man.
In the O'Brien Veer, (if you do not have your book handy) the Pitch man is under the center and the Option back is behind or slightly to one side of the Pitch man. The FB in I is the Option back, he gets lateral from pitch man and then meshes with TB or Dive back. Again he can give it to Dive back, keep it, or pitch it to option back. Now if in both offenses, if all you have to worry about is the one option, cool, you have a shot. You throw in the hundreds of other things you can do, traps, passes, etc. and makes defense a little more difficult.
Speaking of o'Brien Veer, C.H. Underwood developed this. I never coached against him, though I saw it in action. His assistant Benny Grill took the offense to Benjamin and had tremendous success, I did coach against him. Benny and his teams could lose three or four games until they got all of the things meshing. C.H., I do not know, but do not think so, but how many teams could be 0-4 and continue to have the drive to continue until it worked. How many parents would stay out of it that long. All ways amazed me.
The year Benny coached all star game, he had a young man from Highland who was an Option back, he had a young man from Benjamin who was dive back and he made a Pitch man out of a tremendous athlete. They ran the Veer and did it very well considering they only had a week to get ready and I wish I had a copy of the game.
have seen lots of things, but these two offenses were and are (I guess) capable of putting up lots of points.